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THE WOMEN WITH A PAINTED EYES

  • Writer: poii hmar
    poii hmar
  • Feb 28, 2017
  • 4 min read

I got detention today as I didn't do my homework. I was on my way back home. The sun was setting as the sky became darker. The normal way to my home was blocked as there was an accident and the kids were missing so I took the other way. I walked as fast as I can because I was scared. I was on my way to the forest because it was shorter. As my walking pace became faster.... the moon was rising faster too. I was out of breath so I took a break.

I heard a girl screaming. I took my backpack and was planning to get out of the forest but I didn't. What if that girl wanted my help... what if she was the missing girl from the accident. I followed the scream and it leaded me deep down the forest. It was inside a tiny wooden house. I peaked at the window and I saw a little girl's head. Her eyes were taken out and her tongue went missing. I know I was in danger so I went back to where I was. I ran as fast as I could. The sky was dark as I could see the red moon.

I saw a women all in black. Her skin was pure black. She got no mouth, nose nor eyes, it was all blank. At the blank face she had, I could see that she got a painted eyes. A black and white painted eyes. She wore a black hoodie with a jeans. I could hear a whisper ' Are you my sister?' again and again. I just stood and looked at her. She wasn't moving at all. I turned back and prepared to run but I could hear a footstep. I turned back and I saw her. She was right in front of me starring at me with her painted face. I got scared, I gulped and took a deep breath. I looked at her and started to run backwards. She wasn't moving at all. I came out of the forest and ran straight to my house. I locked myself in the bedroom and took a shower. I thought it was all over.

It was in the middle of the night and I heard my parents scream. I panic and ran down to see what was happening. I saw my mom and dad's dead body sitting on the couch with the painted eye women. She was different, her eyes weren't painted anymore, it was blank but her mouth was different. Her blank mouth stretched and smiled. Some part of her skin torn as she smile bigger and bigger. Her teeth wasn't normal, there were millions of needle. She was stretching her long black arms around my parents. I shouted 'GET AWAY FROM MY PARENTS!' I haven't blinked because she will move but I couldn't helped myself. I closed my eyes for a second and she was in front of me with her huge smile. I was shivering and I heard 'Are you my sister?' I answered 'If I say yes, would you leave my little brother alone?' She replied 'Of course' So I agreed that I was her sister. She vanished in the dark and leave my little brother alone.

I told the cops everything but they wouldn't believe. They thought I killed my parents. They took me to mental hospital but I request them to researched about Jane Oliver. I heard whispers in my ears at the forest. They told me all about Jane Oliver.

IN AN OLD NEWSPAPER

Jane Oliver was a 16 year old teenager who went missing. Her sister, Brenda Oliver was the victim as she was with her at the forest. Her sister said 'Jane sacrificed for me to be free. The Man In Black took her. He got no face, he was all black and blank with a black tuxedo' We don't know if this information is true as till now, it was believed Brenda Oliver killed her sister. She will be executed tomorrow evening at 6:00pm.

At my room in the hospital, I heard a sound. I saw Jane (the painted eye) she was with her painted eyes again. I heard a whisper 'Sister, I am here to save you' I felt sad for her so I told her the truth. Her painted eyes went away as her huge smile came slowly by slowly. I heard 'This is impossible' I thought she got angry so I tried to calm her down. she spoke again 'I will still search for my sister' She went away 'You shouldn't have lied' She pierced her sharp stretchy fingers at through my lungs. I spit out blood..... I could feel the pain. I was taken straight away to the hospital.

I woke up at the hospital and told everyone that Jane Oliver is still alive. They didn't believed me, they said the incident was 200 years ago when she was killed by her sister. I ran away from the hospital and made my own life. Trying to tell people what Jane Oliver is alive.... Help me

 
 
 

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